تنمية مهارة اللغة.

[WereWolf]

what's up my brother
yesterday i was setting with my parents and my 2 sisters
talking about the graphic's future
and i said '' the human can never expect the future
do you remember
back with the time for 10 years
when we talk about the computer's future
and we said that we will not
need to mouse and keyboard
and that's will not be there a cpu
just lcd screen touch
''
وبعدين اكتشفت انها فعلا موجوده

[إبن يس]

what's up my brother
yesterday i was setting with my parents and my 2 sisters
talking about the graphic's future
and i said '' the human can never expect the future
do you remember
back with the time for 10 years
when we talk about the computer's future
and we said that we will not
need to mouse and keyboard
and that's will not be there a cpu
just lcd screen touch
''
وبعدين اكتشفت انها فعلا موجوده

It's so good!
Are you the writer of these sentences ?

when i was fourteen i wasn't able to write a good sentences like these ..

[أنس أبو بكر]

Thanks my dear sharif.

[MAXIOS]

First in my opinion that this technique to learn language is very useful
and I will imagine story of young person in begin and continue with him to make
different sentences

let's do it : D
The name of person is Bakr he had got three brothers and two sisters.
he was born in a poor village and his mother is died
despite this he looking forward to future.
his uncle talked to him about his grandparents and how they had been a rich people.

to be continue

تقريباً خمس جمل
أي اخطاء لحد دلوقتي ؟؟

[N.nabil]

جميل جدا اخي ابن يس.

سأكتب الترجمة كنوع من التدريب ثم سأكتب نص مشابه يخصني.

الترجمة:

اسمي محمد شريف .لدي اخوين واخت.وظيفة ابي هي التجارة وأمي تعمل مديرة محاسبة.

جدي وجدتي توفوا قبل ان اولد.


دوري في التقليد:

my name is anas.i have three sisters and one brother.

My father's job delegate procurement.my mother work at our home.

Grandfather and grandmother are live with us.

===========================
سأضيف ثلاث كلمات نسيتها لرد الكلمات بإذن الله.

في خطاء اعتقد انه غير مقصود


ساحاول المشاركه

[N.nabil]

i'm nader nabil from Egypt, i live with my parents at zagazig city.

my favorite hoppies are drawing, travelling and graphics.

i want to be a good artist in the future

Egypt in my opinion is a wonderful country, everything here is great expect the government !.

arabian guys should be more hard workers to get a good job, family and life. i disagree with everyone who thinks government should get a job for him .. this is a dream with 80 million humans !

people should thank GOD ( allah ) for everything they had .. and never we can do this in this time ..

you should challenge yourself to live in our world .. if you can't do this, stay in your home better.

you must remember that you aren't live alone !

[Dimension]

فكرة جميلة
هناك بعض الرتوشات كالأخ الذي ذكر أن جديه توفوا قبل ولادته, كون أنهما أكثر من جد يجب استعمال have وليس has,
My grandparents have died.
و أيضاً My mother works وليس work.
الاخر نادر قدرة تعبيرية جميلة جداً لكن طريقة تركيب بعض الجمل قد تكون منطقية في العربية ولكن في الانكليزية تبدو غريبة قليلاً كمثال stay in your home better, تصاغ ك:
You'd better stay home. كترجمة حرفية لن تعجبك ولكن هكذا تصاغ و ستلتقط هذه الطريقة مع التدريب.
شيء آخر I ضمير أنا تكتب دائما I وليس i أينما كان موقعها في الجملة.
بالتوفيق,
~sion

[أبومايا]

hi my fiend::::today i will tell you about my feuture ::

if i be father and husbund ::i will name my children :: the first son i will name him ibraheem >>the second son hani >>\\

my doughter maby knooz

plz right my sentences

[إبن يس]

First in my opinion that this technique to learn language is very useful
and I will imagine story of young person in begin and continue with him to make
different sentences

let's do it : D
The name of person is Bakr he had got three brothers and two sisters.
he was born in a poor village and his mother is died
despite this he looking forward to future.
his uncle talked to him about his grandparents and how they had been a rich people.

to be continue

تقريباً خمس جمل
أي اخطاء لحد دلوقتي ؟؟

there is a mistake ^_^


his mother is died

died فعل يا رجل و ليست صفة .. الصفة منها dead


his mother is dead

[إبن يس]

فكرة جميلة
هناك بعض الرتوشات كالأخ الذي ذكر أن جديه توفوا قبل ولادته, كون أنهما أكثر من جد يجب استعمال have وليس has,
my grandparents have died......

~sion

أوووه لم ألتفت
تصدق .. خطأ محترم ^_^

[N.nabil]

diminesion : شكرا لك على التصحيح

[أبومايا]

نادر

شكرا على التصحيح مقدما & ^

[أنس أبو بكر]

what's up my brother
yesterday i was setting with my parents and my 2 sisters
talking about the graphic's future
and i said '' the human can never expect the future
do you remember
back with the time for 10 years
when we talk about the computer's future
and we said that we will not
need to mouse and keyboard
and that's will not be there a cpu
just lcd screen touch
''
وبعدين اكتشفت انها فعلا موجوده

فعلا جميل أخي.

تابع .

[أنس أبو بكر]

First in my opinion that this technique to learn language is very useful
and I will imagine story of young person in begin and continue with him to make
different sentences

let's do it : D
The name of person is Bakr he had got three brothers and two sisters.
he was born in a poor village and his mother is died
despite this he looking forward to future.
his uncle talked to him about his grandparents and how they had been a rich people.

to be continue

تقريباً خمس جمل
أي اخطاء لحد دلوقتي ؟؟

جميل جدا اخي.

ملاحظتي هي نفس ملاحظة الأخ ديمونيشن بأن الأصح هي كلمة have .

للتوضيح :

الفرق بين had & have ان هاف للمضارع وللمضارع المستمر اما هاد فلا تطلق إلا على الماضي.

[أنس أبو بكر]

في خطاء اعتقد انه غير مقصود


ساحاول المشاركه

أهلا أخي نادر.

لاأعتقد ان الإس في كلمة سيسترز خطأ فهي للجمع.

فهل هي ماتقصده بأنه خطأ؟؟