جميل أخي بس أرجو أن تستمع لوجهة نظري وهي:
إن هذا المبنى عبارة عن فيلا وهو ليس عمارة كما تفضلت ولهذا يمكن إعتباره خمسة فلل فوق بعضها البعض وهو غير مريح بصريا
العمارة الإسلامية أعظم ما أبدع الإنسان من فكر وفن في البناء....لذا
my friend ..
if iam allowed to critisize this
i would say just like (AL Memar) said, that this is a single construction of a house (perhaps) then , its not really a nice multi story building , as it can be so nice alone, in a lovely surrounding that shows the design of the house..
about the 3d work , good job , and as the others mentioned you can either spend time on the surroundings to make nice reflection in the large glass covered facads.. or .. you can use an other method to materialize the glass of the building , perhapse with a reflection of a photo or something so you can see something interesting in the glass instead of total bluish gray colour..
the first image is the best you presented so far cuz the type of lighting on the model fits the colour of the chosen sky image behind.
and the second one is not really as good as first one ..
and the third one , its possible to happen , but rearly it does , i mean the lighting cuz you rendered sharp shadows from the sun on the building and you put a very cloudy sky behind.
at the end i will say nice job so far, but i encorage you to use the nice villa in an other place for its own with some work on the background
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i hope my words doesnt affect you negatively ,, i think you should concider it as a help for better results ..
salam
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nate
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