موضوع: Here is my new poem ( Seasons for you )

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  1. #1
    عضو متميز
    صور رمزية NEO 3D
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    Here is my new poem ( Seasons for you )

    Hope you like this poetry that I wrote from 2 days ago please give me your thoughts and comments.

    Leaves are falling
    Leaving me behind the silence of fall
    But I know that the forest won't leave me alone
    Can't you just set free from the chains of agony
    life is too short for us
    It can't make us understand which path to take

    All colors seems to fade away
    My path for you are fading away
    Losing my faith in everything I believed
    I know I should run before the moon to catch you
    But I always wonder why should I do this for you

    Now the forest dressed white
    And slay every sense I had
    Cold and white never see any dark
    sun always shines on my face but it's not the same
    Since you in my dreams and thoughts
    You never thought that I can fight and stand
    But now the forest is with me

    She dressed all green
    And the fields just turn out to be a dreams
    Never thought it will catch my soul
    Like a butterfly with the rose
    A rose of black to hold your thorn

    I will not think of you again
    I decide taht I'm here to stay
    With all the singing birds and speaking trees
    The enchantment of them take all my breath away
    No more feelings in vain
    No more never ending cries
    So please forgive me for leaving all the memories
    And for the shattered Pieces I left behind

    Now is a new day without you
    all my fears are gone
    and I forget all that I left behind
    I'm sorry if you can't see the truth
    And it's so you see only what can't be true
    Here is my world that I'll never let go
    So no meaning left to close your eyes
    Cause you'll stay behind






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  2. #2
    عضو متميز
    صور رمزية N.O.B.Y
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    Sep 2006
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    very good man
    realy good poem
    with my best wishes
    Moustafa NOBY
    ...........

  3. #3
    عضو متميز
    صور رمزية NEO 3D
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    Thank you man
    but can you tell me which the best line you like the most






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  4. #4
    عضو متميز
    صور رمزية N.O.B.Y
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    Sep 2006
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    All colors seems to fade away
    My path for you are fading away
    Losing my faith in everything I believed
    I know I should run before the moon to catch you
    But I always wonder why should I do this for you


    IT SEEMS VERY GOOD TO ME
    Moustafa NOBY
    ...........

  5. #5
    Losing my faith in everything I believed

    never let go ya neo 3d

    & nice words

    thank you and god bless u

  6. #6
    عضو متميز
    صور رمزية NEO 3D
    تاريخ التسجيل
    Jul 2003
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    سوريا
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    30
    ردود
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    Thankx Pro hope you the best






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